at the party

[Moose Ryder]

As soon as i walked into the room, they were all silenced, awed by my mysterious beauty. As i carried herself, pale and slender, gracefully and elegantly towards one of the men in the room, a man noticed something. I seemed like a queen, high and regal, with a strange air of mystery about me. And my beauty couldn't help but add mystery to me. I had fire straight red hair, with these strikingly pale blue eyes, blood-red plump lips, with what looked like a natural rose blush, brushed across her pale face, and this porclein face, that seems, if anyone had tried to hit it, would break into a million pieces. I was one of the most beautiful women he have ever seen. he just couldn't help to think, what kind of woman shei was. So that's why, when i floated out the room moments later, he followed me.

[Angel O' Connor]

Ppoetry to my ears.That was flowing,graceful,intellegent as well.

[Moose Ryder]

thank you Vicky.

[Vicky]

That was really well written! Good job!